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Can you suggest any improvements to this poem, many thanks?

This poem was posted five days ago, but it received a violation notice and I have lost all the answers that were given first time round. I would be grateful if you could reply again. Any of my questions that are violated I will always re-post.


I missed this last time. I'm glad you make it a habit to repost when falsely violated.

I find Shadow's gratuitous rewrite to be the most annoying of its kind I've yet seen here. Write your own poem, sir or madam, do not take someone else's


I don't want to suggest improvements. Maybe because I don't see the need. This is very rhythmic, it flows nicely. I love the fact that you insisted on rhyming when so many today don't think rhyme plays a part in poetry.

You wrote the picture

I don't know why I'm writing about Spring in Autumn.. but er.. comment, read, rate and be merry? :)?

Silver Bells Of Spring

A dozen star studded, silver bells. Bound in threads from harp's gold string,
Tinkling sweet upon lily petal toes, a chortling cry to voice her merry step.
Rattling beads that chime in moon crusted orbs,


When I read this, the spring was defiantly & inexplicably replacing the fall around me until the poem ended & the fall set back in. I was impressed by the vivid metaphors & the harmonious wordplay. Very visual & graceful. A welcome hallucination


(Y)x. that is goood, very uhrm - descriptive.

Check my Kanji for me. Is my Kanji correct and have the right meanings given in English?

This afternoon, I decided to go to the Japanese Picture Dictionary and write down all the Hiragana. Then later after my iPod was fully charged, I decided to write all the Kanji. I need help checking to see if it's right. Here comes all the Kanji.


You got the right spelling for some of them, but for many of them you only have phonetic equivalents. Kanji spelling for each word is fixed and you can't just create different spellings with the same pronunciation. Just like you can't spell English as

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CHRISTMAS BELL 1987 4 3/4" high porcelain bell. CMV $15. MB. CRYSTAL BUTTERFLY BELL 1990 Lead crystal bell 6 1/2" high butterfly decals. CMV $15. MB. MOTHERS LOVE PORCELAIN BELL 1988 3" high porcelain bell. CMV $10. MB.

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