Sorry its so long but please read. Any feedback, personal opinions, or criticism is welcome. Enjoy
My vision of the happiest moment of my life starts by marrying her
The proposal would be on a hill at night overlooking
You are very romantic for someone your age and it certainly comes out in the poem, which is good to excellent. Could I suggest a slightly different ending? Instead of the last line as you have written it, how about: 'We wake and remember the day before,
DERRICK GASKIN | Apr 30, 2011
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Apr 30, 2011 by Alex Jenning | Posted in Books & Authors
Sorry its so long but please read. Any feedback, personal opinions, or criticism is welcome. Enjoy
My vision of the happiest moment of my life starts by marrying her
The proposal would be on a hill at night overlooking
I agree. Its enthralling. Keep writing. ;)
| Apr 30, 2011
Awww that's so romantic! I love it!!!
Vanessa Reda | Apr 30, 2011
My fantasy plan that will never be...?
Apr 30, 2011 by Jay Tee | Posted in Books & Authors
Sorry its so long but please read. Any feedback, personal opinions, or criticism is welcome. Enjoy
My vision of the happiest moment of my life starts by marrying her
The proposal would be on a hill at night overlooking our
Wow, that was really good! :D The detail was really good, I could imagine the whole thing completely in my mind. You should write more and post it. i wanna read it. :)
| Apr 30, 2011
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